Hi can some of you experienced 40k loremasters essentially approve this fluff for my new army?
Sons of the Apocalypse (note: apocalypse means a revelation)
A company lead by captain(?) Erasmus of the 7th company of the Blood ravens, during their travels within the warp, encountered a warp storm anomalie. This Storm seemed to resonate and pulsate within their warp soul bodies.. triggering and subjecting them to nightmares of ntold magnitude, compounded by the cruel efforts of the Chaos fiends within the warp...
The portion of the company aboard the strike cruiser experienced a shared nightmare, a vision... they beheld the END of MAN! They found themselves suddenly participants in the last battle of the imperium of man.. whether the mutable time-stream of the warp actually had placed them there or whether it was merely a vision, one that they were living none can say... they fought in the hopeless, futile last battle of Man
As suddenly as they had partook of the battle they were back aboard their vessel.. with one difference. The experience so horrific, so terrible they were no longer the same. Their hair and eyes become white, possessing no color. They returned from the nightmare with the knowledge of the END. Their hearts now bleached clean from the stain of what is man. Realising all the doctrines of the Emperor Himself powerless to stop the end are thereby part of the cause of the End. No longer loyal to the emperor yet still sworn enemies of Chaos their battle has begun.
They care no longer for glory or honor, of hate nor love. Merely one purpose, one cause.. to STOP THE END. Whether they fight as to save man from his prophesied doom or so they themselves dont have to relive the nightmare, who can say?
The portion of the 7th company within the cruiser immediately broke away from the fleet after a fleeing battle...
The psychers now able to reproduce the vision within recruits, began the recruiting to bolster the ranks of this END of Man Army...
ok thats the rough idea of the fluff... not written up properly but so u get the idea..recommend reading the Legion OT Damned backstory before you comment..
so suggestions anyone?