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June 4, 2003, 06:49:33 PM »
I wrote this here fiction for a contest originally, only to find that the contest had ended a year and a half ago. Oh, such is life. Well, I now leave it to this wonderful library of excellent Eldar stories, and it can now be found in the 'Fluff and Fiction' section. The only problem with this is that I can't get any feedback! So, I ask you to please read, and tell me what you think...
'Shadowed'
http://www.eldaronline.com/fluff/fiction_shadowed.shtml
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It's very well-written, and cool too. I like it a lot, it's a worthy addition. It has a good sense of mysterious suspense, with the truth only fully revealed at the end. Great work.
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Thanks. That's high praise coming from an almighty mod... I'll probably do some more, when another good idea hits me, and when I've got time to write them. I found they are fun to make, so I won't need an overdue contest for an incentive next time.
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i liked that story! the eldar are being nice, in their own self serving way
it makes me feel good, thumbs up
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