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Deff from Abuv
« on: July 9, 2012, 02:24:06 PM »
Just a short piece for the Ork July Fiction contest :)
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“Line up fer inspekshun, ya maggitz, Boss is on ‘is way!” bawled Drill Sarjunt Lugnuz through clenched teeth, causing the lit end of his cigar stub to blaze red.

He watched disapprovingly as a dozen orks scrabbled against one another to be first to the line. Even Fiddla, Mokko’s gretchin co-pilot, hammered his bony elbows into the unfeeling slabs of bicep on the arm of his nearest squad mate, the grizzled veteran Madruk, in a vain attempt to gain the advantage. Lugnuz bit down hard on his cigar, and beetled his brow heavily over his flight-monocle as he surveyed the troops. A handful were old flyboyz, half a dozen missions already under their belt, but too many were little more than eager yoofs. Still, with the exception of their commanding officer, and so far Lugnuz himself, the Stormboyz was not a corps to grow old in. ‘Live fast and die falling’ was the motto inked onto more than one of the ramshackle rokkit packs that lay scattered around them in various states of disrepair. Gaztikka, the least favoured Mekboy in the Waaagh who had been assigned to work with the Stormboyz was the only member of the squad who had not lined up on command - instead, he sucked his teeth as he laboured over a gently rocking pack which was emitting intermittent whining sounds, and seemed entirely oblivious to the sudden flurry of activity around him.

Wing-boss Fragga ‘Dive-by’ Doomtoof cut an imposing figure as he crossed the broken and weed-infested asphalt runway towards where the small band of Stormboyz stood rigidly to attention. On his right arm he wore an ugly, brutal-looking power klaw, and with his left he carried a large and unwieldy rokkit pack as if it weighed no more than a six-pack of beer. The rokkit pack had been crudely shaped in the likeness of a shark at its front end, and atop it was adorned with a leering yellow moon bigger than Doomtoof’s head. He caught the tail end of Lugnuz bawling out one of the newer members of the squad over the state of his boots, and relaxed his perpetual scowl into a toothy grin, no less menacing.

“Big boss ‘as work fer uz, ladz,” he began, letting his rokkit pack drop to the ground with a loud clang, followed by a more disturbing sloshing of rocket-fuel. He began to pace slowly up the line, trying to cross his hands behind his back, but finding it rather difficult with one of the in an enormous and limb-threatening power klaw. “Wagonz is movin’, an’ dey’z goin’ ter try an’ cross no-orks-land. But da ‘oomie’s ‘as dis bunka, see, on a big ‘ill, an’ dere’s no way up fer dem reg’lar boyz. Takes a speshul krew, duz dat. So ‘e’s asked uz.”

Lugnuz took special pride that if there was any trepidation felt by any of the stormboyz present, not one of them so much as exchanged a glance, each staring rigidly forwards as if they had been set in plascrete. Fiddla, however, hopped from one foot to the other, his arm stretched high in the air in silent plea. No-one acknowledged him. Meanwhile, Gaztikka started banging loudly on the side of the still wobbling rokkit pack with a spanner.

“It ain’t gunna be eazy,” continued Doomtoof, grinning even wider, “as dey’z got big gunz ter shootz at uz if dey seez uz comin’ . . . an’ dey’ll see uz comin’. An’ dere’z more’n twenny ‘oomies inside, firty if we’z unlucky . . . an’ we’z yooshally unlucky. On the up side, sum ov yer will die in da sky before we’z even in range ov da gunz. Any questions?”

With a swift single motion, Mokko’s arm swung out in a half-circle, catching Fiddla full in the face just as his mouth began to open, and sent him sprawling backwards into a pile of oil drums, which dispersed loudly on impact. The ork’s arm snapped back to his side immediately, as if nothing had happened, and Doomtoof surveyed an unmoving line up as if looking for a sign of weakness. Lugnuz’s cigar smouldered quietly in the drawn out pause, punctuated only by the grunts of the attendant mek as he struggled with something inside the rokkit pack he was working on.

“Right,” said Doomtoof with a curt nod. “Wot’s up wiv’ dat pack, Gaz?” The mekboy turned around with an expression of brief surprise on his face, as if he had forgotten he was not alone.

“Gretchin stuck in it, boss. ‘E won’t come out, but I’ve tied ‘is legs to da rudda, so ‘e shud be able ter ‘elp steer.”

“Gud plan,” replied Doomtoof, dropping his grin in favour of his more comfortable scowl once again. He flexed his power klaw experimentally. “Give that one to Noggart,” he added thoughtfully, before reaching down for his rokkit pack again, and shooting a meaningful glance at Lugnuz.

“Right, ya maggitz,” Lugnuz bellowed, spittle and strands of cigar leaf spraying everywhere.“Yooz hurd da Kaptin! Load up an’ strap ‘up, an’ anyone not carryin’ ‘is own weight in stikkbomms will ‘ave more rammed down ‘is froat until ‘e is! Move it, move it - skies is dark’n’cloudy an’ dere’s a good chance ov’ a storm . . .”

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Bad Moon Warboss Mugragga Skullthumper surveyed the rolling roaring battle line with satisfaction. From his vantage point aboard the lead battlewagon - a dark iron behemoth dubbed “Wurldkrusher”, he could see the entire landscape before and behind. Ahead, a mile or so of cracked and barren earth stretched out towards the human outpost, itself defended by an irregular criss-cross of defensive barriers, partially-abandoned gun emplacements, and broken trench work. To the west the land sloped slowly away towards the boiling lava sea, and to the east a low ridge was beginning to grow into impassable cliffs, along the top of which ran sporadic metal crenallations. In the distance, where the cliffs had reached more than a hundred feet in height, the sun glinted off a large defensive artillery outpost above, glaring down like a brooding sentinel onto the killing grounds below.

To either side of Mugragga‘s battlewagon, a mismatched assortment of trukks, battlewagons, and various looted and ‘improved’ vehicles from conquests past fanned out and back in a shallow V, an enormous dust and exhaust cloud roiling behind them like an angry stormfront. A large number of bikes roared in and out of the larger vehicles, eager to be loosed on the waiting defences, and although they were hidden from sight by the roof of his battlewagon, he could hear overhead the myriad deffkoptas buzzing backwards and forwards over the larger wagons, acting as both aerial reconnaissance and unwitting protection against any enemy barrage aimed at more key targets.

Around Mugragga lounged his Flash gitz, many of them more machine than ork, thanks to the joint ministrations of Dok Red-eye and Big Mek Maggrek Geargrind. Some of the gitz had even replaced one of their arms with a Snazzgun mount, the better to brace against the impact of firing the enormous weapons, ostensibly, but more often than not to avoid having ever to be parted from them. One of the gitz raised a metal face and thick iron jaw to the roof as two soft impacts were followed by a third somehwat heavier one, accompanied by a scrape of metal and the popping sound of backfiring rokkits. Over the roar of the engines, two voices were just discernable:

“Sarjunt, try an’ find ‘is leg, dat’ll nevva do. An’ if ya can’t, take ‘im ter Red-eye fer a new wun.”

“Sah, yessah.”

A moment later, the brutish countenance of Fragga Doomtoof swung into view, framed by his flying helmet; his soot-covered goggles pushed up onto his forehead. His eyes were surrounded by two goggle-shaped patches of dark green, in an otherwise blackened face that made his yellowing teeth stand out all the more. He eased himself in through the firing port in the side of the wagon, and gave a smart salute.

“Sir!” he growled, over the noise of the Wurldkrusha’s engines. “Reportin in. Mishun’z a sukzess.”

Warboss Mugragga nodded his approval. He considered the Stormboy Kaptin for a moment.

“Any losses?” he said after a brief pause.

“Akseptible losses,” replied Doomtoof, but he made no move to leave.

“Anyfin’ else, Kaptin?”

“No sir,” replied Doomtoof, replacing his goggles and casting himself in such deep shadow that he might almost have passed for a kommando. He checked his rokkits, seemed satisfied, and then put one foot on the rail to launch himself out of the opening again. As if in afterthought, he turned back to the Warboss. “We’ll need sum new rokkits packs. An’ I’ll need anuvva dozen recruits. Best ter start drillin’ ‘em ternight.”

Several of the gitz exchanged amused glances, but Mugragga just nodded again. He waved an arm expansively.

“Not all of dese will last da nite,” he said, indicating the armoured spearhead in general. “Tell Gaztikka ‘e can take anyfin’ dat ain’t still movin’ by da mornin’. As fer boyz, take sum of Wadruk’s. E’s got plenty - big’uns too.” He paused again, his dark eyes moving over Doomtoof‘s rokkit pack. “Big izn’t a problum, izzit?”

“No, sir - da bigga dey iz, da harda dey fall.”

And with that, Doomtoof was gone, leaving behind him only a cabin full of rokkit exhaust and disgruntled gitz.

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Re: Deff from Abuv
« Reply #1 on: July 9, 2012, 02:25:03 PM »
Quick pic of the inspiration for some of the characters:


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Re: Deff from Abuv
« Reply #2 on: July 10, 2012, 09:28:23 AM »
A most excellent read, darn good stuff! Maybe just a little bit longer with a bit more detail on the assault, or a sequel  ;D

Good Stuff, thanks for a good story.
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Re: Deff from Abuv
« Reply #3 on: July 10, 2012, 02:01:08 PM »
Liked your story Baron, nice work! ;D
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Re: Deff from Abuv
« Reply #4 on: July 29, 2012, 05:47:37 PM »
Thanks for the encouraging words :)

Second installment below. Hope you like it, it's a continuation, but shifts the perspective - stick with it, it's about nobz really!
This has been a fun comp; if people are interested, I might post another installment or two, even after the competition is over.

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Captain Vates bowed his head reverently before the shrine, the stone floor of the sanctum cool on his knees, even through the padding of his jumpsuit. He was a good officer, he told himself, his faith in the Emperor unshakeable. He had advanced further than any other in his class, and it was undoubtedly due to his unswerving devotion that the commisar had given him command of the first line of defence surrounding the city-station of Altimus IV. Mechanically, he intoned a liturgy under his breath, the words so ingrained that he no longer needed to pay any attention to the utterance - his body was simply a conduit for the Emperor’s will, his voice a solemn vow of obedience that needed no reflection.

And yet today his recital did not steady his growing sense of disquiet. He glanced down at his left hand, observing the trembling in his smallest finger. He narrowed his eyes, and tried to tell himself that it was simply his body resonating the deep rumbling sound that shook the dust from the statues around him, and opened fresh hairline cracks in the weathered bunkers that were his current charge. It was a deep and persistent sound, so sonorous that at times it was possible to ignore it, to pretend that it was merely part of the background, like the sound of lavabugs at sunrise across the choked desert plains. But Vates could not ignore the blunt truth behind the sound - the approaching horde of ramshackle vehicles thundering across the cracked earth towards their current position was about the bluntest truth he had ever had to face.

He clenched his hand into a fist to stop his finger shaking, and got to his feet. He glanced at a small spherical holograph to the right of the shrine, and then turned to the low roof and gave a short salute in the indicated direction, towards distant Terra. The simple ritual made him straighten his back and scowl at himself. He was an officer of the Imperial Guard, a defender of humanity. No matter how many accursed xenos were descending upon him, he had his faith as his shield, and the blessed armoury of mankind at his disposal. He knew his liturgies, had studied the approved tactica of imperial warfare for over a decade, and he would not - could not - fail in his duty. He flexed his fingers with sudden conviction, and wrapped them around the handle of his gold-inlaid bolt pistol as if he were choking the alien threat with a single gesture. He stood motionless for a moment, and allowed the sound of the advancing machines to fully enter his consciousness, and heard them anew as a pounding rhythm to set the words of prayer to; he welcomed the chance to prove his devotion to the Emperor, and to champion the defence of the city. Snatching his chainsword from the door jamb, he stepped smartly up the steps and out into the blistering heat outside.

An orderly ran up to him, a look of trepidation on his face. Vates sensed the young guardsman had something new to cause him concern, and he felt a knot tighten in his stomach. I am a shield of mankind, he thought firmly.

“Sir,” breathed the orderly, his chest heaving. “You’d better come up to the wall - it’s nearly time.”

The wall was both a physical and metaphorical barrier that stretched across the cracked plains for more than a mile, from the high cliffs on one side to the edge of the lava sea on the other. It was nearly twenty feet high, built largely of earth, but fortified every so often by armour-plas bunkers and towers. There were few enough reasons to pass beyond the wall, so there were only 3 gates, one of which was supported by the network of defence and support buildings that Vates’ company now occupied. The gates were massive, heavily reinforced affairs - nearly as thick as the wall itself, and cumbersome and time consuming to open or close. To his recollection, he had only ever seen them open and close twice, both times for inspection and maintenance purposes. In front of the wall was a long disused network of trenches and abandoned buildings, stretching out for nearly half a mile into the wastes. Here and there were scattered the remains of reinforced palisades, sticking out of the broken earth like the skeletal ribcages of long-dead behemoths.

Vates crossed the forecourt that led to the enormous bulkhead gateway smartly, and ascended the rough-cut earthen steps to the summit of the defence line, passing nervous-looking guardsman as he went. Some were praying quietly over their weaponry, others looked at him with a mixture of anxiety and hope in their eyes. He returned all gazes with a steely countenance, trying to exude calm conviction. His men needed nothing from him now but determined example, and he would meet the enemy secure in the knowledge that they were the very instruments of the Imperium: loyal, trained, ruthless.

At the top of the wall, he paused, despite himself. He had expected to see a convoy of ramshackle vehicles - his scouts had reported a fleet of transports, accompanied by smaller support vehicles and backed by a mechanical and infantry detachment that would take hours to reach their position after the initial spearhead had hit. What he saw as he crested the top of his fortifications was a huge roiling cloud of dust and smoke, obscuring everything from cliffs to sea, and rising fifty feet or more into the sky. At its fore, he could make out indistinct shapes, racing just ahead of the cloud, but so violent was the maelstrom that each time he tried to focus on one it was engulfed by the tumbling folds. Beyond that he glimpsed only the faintest outlines of larger shapes, and each one only momentarily. The cloud was streaked with black oily belches, intermingling with the yellowish dust of the plains, which gave it a peculiarly marbled quality, and it reminded Vates more of an angry stormfront than anything. The noise had grown to gargantuan proportions, and ordinary speech on the wall had become impossible - and the onslaught was still over a mile away.

For a moment, uncertainty gripped him. The wall was defended by batteries of defence guns, but how would they target anything in that billowing smog? His knuckles turned white beneath his glove where he still gripped the handle of his bolt pistol, and he muttered an oath under his breath. Nearby artillery crews had turned to watch him ascend, and were watching him intently for his solution. He bit the inside of his cheek and took a last step up onto the crenulations.  There was no point shouting, so instead he pointed his chainsword at the oncoming fury, and kept it as level as he could at shoulder height, squinting at the cloud as he tried to judge the range. Crews turned back to their guns in grateful obedience. Fortunately, the abandoned trenches and ruins were still visible, and he knew well how his guns would penetrate that familiar expanse. If only he knew what they were shooting at.

Finally, as the invasion breached the outer perimeter of the abandoned defences, the indistinct shapes at the front of the advance became clear enough to identify. Warbikes, dozens of them, jinked in and out of the cloud, skipping nimbly over trenches, or skirting them altogether. Their engines belched blackest into the towering dustcloud, and the breakneck speed with which they tackled the haphazard terrain was almost breathtaking. Decisively, Vates lowered his badge of office, and as the sword came down, the barking retort of the imperial artillery guns echoed off and around the wall.

Vates watched the scene with as much impassivity as he could muster, deaf to anything but the roar of approaching engines and the thunder of his guns to either side. He watched incredulous as the bikes increased their speed to overcome the barrage, racing through ruined masonry and towards the palisades as if they would at any moment sprout wings. More than one ended its run in a fiery ball of twisted metal - sometimes a casualty of the smoking artillery, sometimes simply a casualty of the terrain and rider’s momentary inattention - but still they came on. Then something caught Vates’ eye: amongst the nearest palisades, some thirty feet from the wall itself, the sand began to move. He stared for a moment, uncomprehending, before he realised what he was seeing. Orks, who had lain submerged and camouflaged beneath the sand, presumably approaching unnoticed through the network of trenches during the night, were begin to re-emerge and busy themselves around the palisade itself. It took Vates a moment or two longer to react, in which time the orks had already begun to twist and wrestle with the protrusions themselves. Even as Vates was barking unheard orders, he realised that the orks were beginning, slowly but surely, to reverse the direction of the fortifications; so that the palisades would point directly at the lip of the battlements on which he stood. To what end, he could not imagine, but he didn’t intend to wait to find out. Abandoning his useless voice, he spun around to glance down at the courtyard beneath him. The orks were inside the range of his artillery, but he had much more at his disposal than the long range guns. He motioned a short command to a veteran company waiting in strict regiment below. Without hesitation they readied their lasguns and trotted smartly up the steps to line the wall.

Several of the orks fell to the first volley, more to the second as the guardsmen found their range, but still more put their shoulders to the task, seemingly unheeding of the incoming fire. Vates felt a sense of rising urgency, and tried to shout encouragement over the cacophony. Then, as he began to taste the dust cloud at the back of his throat, he realised with sudden horror what the orks were planning. Three of the palisades had been almost fully rotated, and towards each of these several of the bikes were converging, intending to use them as makeshift ramps to assault the ramparts themselves. Vates pulled his pistol free of its holster, and uttering a desperate prayer to the Emperor, he flailed his chainsword frantically towards the racing warbikes, willing his troops to ready for the charge.

“We are the shield of mankind!” he cried, but even he could no longer hear his own voice.
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Gizmik shook his head violently in frenzied excitement as he twisted the throttle again, threatening to tear it from the handlebars. He bared his teeth defiantly against the hail of fire scattering around him as he hit the readjusted palisade, barely aware of the kommando stumbling away riddled with lasgun holes. He felt the bike shudder underneath him, and then he was momentarily airborne, hurtling through the air towards the humans crouching behind their pathetic defences. He dimly registered that one was still standing, pointing a thin human weapon at him, and recognised it as something human commanders carried. His grimace widened into a grin, and he revved the engine again, spinning his back wheel faster in mid-air.

Gizmik knew no liturgies, and had not studied imperial tactica for so much as an hour, never mind a decade. He fought not for a distant and frail Emperor, and only nominally for Gorvag, the biggest and self-proclaimed boss of the many bikers who had flocked to Mugragga’s waaagh. All he had was a big axe, biceps like a bag of rocks, and the brute aggression and instinct for war common to all of his race. As he sailed over the crude fortifications the humans occupied, he felt a slight scratch as the chainsword rattled against his ribs; then, with a bellow that was audible even over the roar of his engines he let go his handlebars and swung his axe in a mighty circle, even as he careened into the courtyard beyond, the third stabilising wheel he had crudely bolted to his bike’s chassis grinding noisily against the oversized suspension as it fought to keep his warbike upright.

Gripping the throttle once again and bodily forcing his front tyre into contact with the ground once more, he turned his bike in an expansive three-quarter skid, knocking two more humans flying with the side of the enormous machine. He gnashed his teeth in satisfaction as he spun around in time to watch the human commander topple down the steps in two halves; then, with barely a moment’s hesitation he gunned his engine again, and thudded up the rough steps, crushing the freshly detached torso beneath his dust-caked wheels. In a mad zig-zag, he barrelled along the top of the wall, sending humans leaping down on either side, aiming his forks directly at the repeatedly recoiling flak gun at the nearest emplacement. Another nob biker sailed over his head into the courtyard, but he did not stop to see who it was - he wasn’t going to let anyone else get to his target ahead of him.

He could feel the trembling of the walls even through the suspension of his bike, and knew the konvoy was close. Without warning, a bomma broke cloud cover, almost entirely inverted, and struggled to right itself before it collided with the wall. The flak guns strained against their mountings as their crew struggled to turn them to bear on the fresh threat, but even as they raked the flank of the plane, it flipped almost elegantly over before releasing its payload and pulling up suddenly in a stomach-lurching climb. The plane disappeared in seconds, and Gizmik collided with both crew and gun in a chopping frenzy, at exactly the moment that the dropped bomb collided with the large gate beneath them. There was a huge explosion, and the wall ruptured, spilling its contents across a wide area.

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Mugragga’s battlewagon, the Wurldkrusher, turned aside the broken remains of the wrecked portal with a grinding of metal, and juddered to a halt just inside the wall, heat still rising from its blistered exhausts. The uppermost hatch flipped open, and Mugragga himself emerged, swinging one large and iron-plated boot over the rim so that he sat on the edge with one leg still inside the vehicle. He scratched his chin through brush-like bristles, and surveyed the carnage around him. Beneath his foot, a large iron plate slid aside smoothly, and then fell off entirely, clattering noisily to the ground. From the opening, his personal body guard lumbered out of the wagon and dropped heavily the short distance to the sandy, debris-strewn courtyard below; cyborked gitz with even more dakka than teef. Almost lazily they swept the courtyard, improbably large snazzguns covering every step. Gokmaz, a brute with a metal skull for a face, gave a brief snort - something between derision and amusement - as he kicked at a large piece of fallen masonry. Beneath it was the twisted wreckage of a warbike.

“Wun ov Gorvag’s ladz ‘ere, boss,” grunted Gokmaz through his metal jaws. Mugragga stopped scratching his chin momentarily, and craned his neck to see.

“’E alive?” he growled, his voice as deep as the low rumble of the battlewagon’s idling engine. There was a brief pause as Gokmaz made an examination with the toe of his iron-shod boots.

“P’raps,” he conceded eventually.

Mugragga leaned over and thumped hard on the roof of the battlewagon beneath him. He used the hand that was not encased in a huge power klaw, but still the noise was impressive. In response, another ork poked his head out of the opening, and then eased himself down onto the floor.  Half of his head was covered by a large array of bionik optics at the centre of which was a large red unblinking orb which had given him the typically imaginative name Dok Red Eye. He sauntered over to where Gokmaz was still poking something with his foot, and then bent over his work with sudden enthusiasm. Between them, they hauled the unconscious body of Gizmik free of the rubble. Red Eye prised open the prone ork’s eyelids, revealing the unseeing eyes beneath, and grunted thoughtfully. After a moment’s deliberation, he reached into his pack and pulled out an ugly looking syringe, crusted in grime, an oddly glowing and dried green goo, and caked blood. After an experimental swing, he dug it deep into Gizmik’s chest, who suddenly jerked upright and began vomiting copiously. The dok stepped back in satisfaction.

After a short coughing fit, Gizmik waved a hand vaguely around, and tried to speak. Greenish froth spilled from his lips.

“Wot did ‘e say?” asked Mugragga, leaning forward as if it would help. Gokmaz leaned over with obvious distaste, so that what should have been his ear was close to the recent source of vomit and green foam. Gizmik mumbled something, and Gokmaz straightened again, chuckling slightly.

“’E sez ‘e needs anuvva bike,” he reported.

Mugragga smiled too, a terrifying sight.

“Get ‘im wun, and get ‘im on it.” He raised his power klaw accusingly at the nearby human settlement of Altimus IV, now without its outer defences. “Tomorra, da propa fightin’ starts.”

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Re: Deff from Abuv
« Reply #5 on: July 30, 2012, 10:10:01 AM »
That was a good read and very well written, Good Stuff! I enjoyed it, while I personally think that there was too much human character development for the amount of interaction that the commander got with the orks, it was still a fairly balanced read.

Good stuff all round, and only one more day for you to get the next installment done if you want some teef for it.  :)
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Re: Deff from Abuv
« Reply #6 on: July 30, 2012, 11:28:21 AM »
I personally think that there was too much human character development for the amount of interaction that the commander got with the orks

I guess that was intentional, I was trying to convey the brutal and sudden nature of an well-executed ork assault, by building up the expectation of a more even fight. (Also, this sort of thing happens in game all the time; our most well-fluffed and carefully planned characters have a tendancy to die disappointingly quickly and feebly! Trooper-third-from-the-right on the other hand turns out to be invincible . . . ???)

Good stuff all round, and only one more day for you to get the next installment done if you want some teef for it.

Heh, not much chance of that, but like I say, I might add more later if inspired. :)

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Re: Deff from Abuv
« Reply #7 on: July 30, 2012, 01:28:54 PM »
I see your point, so I guess I missed it, a perfectly good and experienced commander dies in the opening minutes of the fight, good one!

I guess I hadn't had enough coffee to pick up on the joke, but now I see it, LOL and you are correct, always watch out for that third trooper on the right.
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