I like it. A few minor points though.
Shadowseer- D-field, Riveblade, Shuriken Pistol (with Bio-explosive amo),
tanglefoot + hallucinogen grenades = 122pts
Is he on the Venom? If not - drop the ammo.
Elites.
Solitaire- Kiss, Plasma Pistol, D-field, Powerblades, tanglefoot + hallucinogen
grenades = 161pts
I am guess he is not on the Venom. Drop the Plasmapistol for a shuriken pistol and get plasma grenades.
Troupes.
Harlequins (5)- Kiss, Power Weapon, 2x fusions, tanglefoot + hallucinogen
grenades = 179pts
Harlequins (6)- Kiss, Power Weapon, 2x fusions, tanglefoot + hallucinogen
grenades, Master w. Riveblades = 240pts
Whichever group is on foot should drop their fusionpistol. I am not too sure on a Leader at these low points, but sure, if you want to. Get plasmagreandes over tanglefoot though. In 4th Ed you don't need them.
Fast Attack.
Jetbikes (4)- 2x Power Weapons, Shurriken pistols, 2x Shurriken Cannons,
Master w. Riveblades =232pts
Very pricey. I would drop the Leader for another bike and exchange cannons for Fusionguns.
Heavy Support.
Venom- Holo-fields = 65pts
Get fusiongun for this one as well.
Basically, whatever runs need to FoF, and you are then paying for shooting you won't use. And you have the speed on the bikes and venom to use a Fusiongun, so use them.