Hello Alienscar, first off thanks a lot for the in-depth reply! This forum is already some of the better feedback (or feedback at all) than I have been able to get and it helps me out. Thanks for the compliments and I'll take your suggestions seriously.
This video was 30mins because it was Part3, but I typically shoot for around 20 mins. I'm glad you enjoyed the condensed format. I do watch longer batreps on youtube sometimes but as you said it is difficult. I feel like the quality of the video should be commensurate with the video length. =)
As for the moving camera, and desire for more stationary camera, I agree and will try to do more of that. When I made my first video a couple months ago, I watched it and made my own list of critiques, and that was one of them... move, stay stay stay stay, move again.
I will weigh what you said about game turns vs player turns, since there was another comment on dakkadakka that said the opposite. As you said, it would increase video length.
I like the music, but primarily I am bound by copyright. So far I have found a couple of "copyright free" music sources on Youtube and torrents but not many. I will search more but I am limited.
Again thanks for the feedback!