Lord: Chainfist is a huge no....... if your opponent has half a brain the IC will never get to attack.
Termies are bad 'bodyguards'...able to fall back and sweept in combat, along with the lord.IoCG is good, HF is ok, there should be a powerfist somewhere in there....while, I don't think such a big unit should be deepstriking, and footslogging usually equates to late game usage.
Oblits are ok.
CSM's with flamers should really be on Rhino's...
CSM's with melta's are ok.
Generally, one does not base their opinions on a handful (or less) of games, as amphetamine parrot happens and there has not been enough games to average their performance out....
My 7 Cents.