here is another update!
[EDIT]!
Windows and headlights done
Birds eye view
With turret
Front predator configuration
sides
back
interior
rhino configuration
Budieguard, i live in Kobe but now i live in north japan far from osaka and far from tokyo
arigatou ichirou sempai
i made fluff it is in the chapter fluff for chaos i will look for it
oh and i forgot my dreadnaught has now a assault cannon
and here is my fluff;
Hello Kitty Marines!
Hello Kitticus is a smaller power of chaos, when slaneesh emerged who was a benevolent god, was sucked into chaos Maelstrom and was changed forever. It ideals of cuteness was still there but now perverted. It looked on the Human empire with disdain, all these darkness and fear inspiring architecture, Hello Kitticus would bring cuteness and loveliness back to the imperium even if it would be destroy it in the process.
The bright cats space marine chapter would be the first to be converted. On the just liberated planet of Sanrio, Chapter commander Halokaton found a small cute statue, after the battle. He felt an unnatural attraction to this statue and secretly he took it with him as a spoil of war and hid it in his chamber. The following campaigns Hello Kitticus slowly corrupted the chapter commander, and Halo was converted to the ways of cuteness. He hid the idol at the chapter chapel and after him the chaplains were the first to convert. It was during the charmy campaign that the
whole chapter changed and showed its "true" color, dropping their former chapter colors the marines emerged in a multitude of bright colors. Hello Kitticus was pleased and gave the marines the gift of his face. The chapter now renamed to the hello kitty chapter, massacred their allies in a cute fashion, who fled in confusion and disarray because of the mental anguish caused by the intolerable cuteness level.
When the inquisition later came to investigate the planet, they were horrified to find joyfull happy people worshipping, idols of hello kitty, wearing cute clothes and accessories and had painted their cities in joyfull colors, singing songs of praise for Hello Kitticus. The inquisition dealt accordingly with this heresy of worshipping a false god and ordered Exterminatus.
But the Hello Kitty Chapter allready had left for another planet to show the cute ways of Hello Kitticus
(probably will be based on slaneesh rules)