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Offline Steamboat Willy

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From The Mind Of Me.....
« on: July 31, 2003, 04:36:40 PM »
This is a thread on poetry.  i'm not sure where to put it, so i asked Falhandir (dont ask me why...) so im gonna post it here (blame falhandir if you want to move it)

Post your stuff here too!!

A lone soul,
sits silently on a solitary rock
ina sea of fire.  An ocean ablaze.
The one true thing, flawless

and perfect, like a diamond, she sits

A single note,
the siren song,

Utter perfection, with a voice to match.
But,
they see past the looks,
to a dark soul,
wanting, tempting,
Zarconian desire

But the sorrow is true,
what she is
and what she wants
are uncomparable

for her
sadness is forever
in her evil heart
all is not well.
War in the mind

To die or to sleep?
that is the question
To live and be tortured
by ones pain
or end it all
and be eternally forgotten?

What i say here,
I do not lie,
evil is good
it cannot die...


and number 2...

Well, my dear, are you the one?
Of course you are…
Who am I?
You need not know…

Ah, my dear, appearances can be deceiving…
Your bright blue eyes,
Brilliant blonde hair,
You do well to at hiding what you are…

Oh, my dear, don’t say that
I am here to help,
I know your pain
I feel your soul, crying…

Yes, my dear, I know,
I feel your dark heart
Your twisted, torture soul,
Yes, I can help…

Alright, my dear, wipe those tears or crystal
From your cheeks,
You know what you must do,
Do you trust me?

That’s it, my dear, release…
Release the anger, the hate
You need no longer suffer
Embrace the darkness…

Oh, my dear, I feel it…
I feel it in you…
Are you afraid?  You should be
Embrace the darkness

Another soul turns from light to dark,
From good to evil
From white to black
It is more than physical
The fires of revenge burn in the heart,
Not a shred of love left,
In this evil soul…

Ah, my fledgling, what would they say,
If they saw you now?
Pure, refined,
Unblemished evil…

Oh, my dark princess,
You have exceeded all expectations…
What?
You choose to speak?

No, my princess, it was for the best,
I no longer see the weak,
Innocent, naive girl
I see… do you know what I see?

My princess, I se an evil,
Dark hearted creature
With a soul to match
The ultimate temptation…

Well, my dear, it was your choice
You didn’t have to become,
It was your ultimate decision, there’s no going back,
It was your choice to embrace… the...darkness


and a third... (this is what CoTN was based apon)

Night sky, darkness
Shattered by moonlight
A man walks alone
Takes shelter under the birch tree
As it begins to rain.

I had been time, since
He had last called upon her
Since she had graced him with her presence,
Her beauty,
His heart played the samba

He still remembered, her
Fine form,
Flowing dark hair
Eyes of emerald
He walked to the door

As he approached, it
Opened.  She stood there,
Her smile piercing the night air,
Corset of jet satin, those eyes of emerald
He handed her the rose.

She took it, and held
It with both hands to her face
And smelled its sweet aroma.
She placed it on the table.
She took his hand.

‘You are cold’ said he. She
Smiled, and whispered in his ear,
‘de mortuis nil nisa bonum’,
She turned, her shawl twisted round.
She gestured for him to follow

Up the stairs, he turned
Into her room, a fire burned
She lay on the bed,
Outstretched. Compelled,
He came further…

She brushed her long hair back, she
Whispered ‘Come, come lay with me my man’
He sat,
He breathed deeply
And lay down with her

His back against her body
His head rested upon her bosom
He listened to her chest
For the familiar crescendo of her heart.
He heard nothing.

She fondled his hair, softly
Bit his ear, his hands
Slowly,
Unbuttoned her corset
She closed her eyes

He slowly unravelled the calyx, of
Her clothing,
An atmosphere of fey surrounded him,
Heart pounding, breathing faster,
Then she opened her eyes.

Like a predator,
She struck
Teeth bearing
His jugular,
She drank.

Crimson dripped down her chin, she
Let out a breathe of satisfaction,
Her sanguine instincts took over,
This damsel had struck,
The coup de grace delivered

She smiled, licked the ruby droplets from
Her fingertips,
She caressed her hair, and gave a wicked smile
She was happy
This creature of the night was no longer alone….


and the last...

What is Love?
Is it a show
of all that is good?
Or are

we fools
imprisoned by our
emotions?
How do you

know when you
are in
love?
is there

a feeling
you must have
for them?
when I

first saw you
I had something,
I felt something,
that no wise man could explain...

Is that love?

When we spoke
it became clear
that you were
the one
I thought, i knew
i needed you...

Is that love?

You were alone
in life
As was i,
we needed, we were
meant to be together.

Is that love?

i was warned
to wait, to stop
but man wants what
it cannot have...

is that love?

That is the question
i asked you
your answer
cessated my heart, my soul...

'That is not love...'

Like a book I opened,
but your heart stayed shut
I was honest
you were evasive
I beleive in you
you dismissed me...

You are a siren
queen of temptation
princess of rejection

to this day
I try to understand
your mystery.
I search for your rosetta stone

Like the meaning of life,
one should never
find out, untill
it is too late.

What is Love?

Love controls,
love destroys
love misleads, falsifys
love temps
It hides the inevitable
breaking boundries

The burning feeling
in my frozen
heart tonight
hates the show
the deillusional masquerade
that love is

As i write this
i sit in the moonlight
my only company
a single rose,
it knows not the answer...

But if love is evil....

What is hate?


what you rekon? post your own too!

(PLEASE dont move this to space tavern it wil get completly ignored...)

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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #1 on: July 31, 2003, 04:57:08 PM »
i still think it should be here. very cool poems. i'll put one of mine up and then add the other one a bit later.



I Cannot Tell the Future.  

I cannot tell the future,
I think not of the past,
But this I say,
LIVE everyday,
And have yourself a blast.

Love is an enigma,
Treat it not as a stigma,
The bearer cannot choose the one,
Their heart may ever yearn for.

Love your life,
It’s precious short,
But when it’s in a mess,
And when it’s full of stress,
Think not of abort.


the other one i think is better so i'll add it soon
I carry with me an Inquisitorial Seal. It is a small, unassuming object contained in a neat box of Pluvian obsidian. It is a modest thing. Relatively plain, adorned with a single motif and a simple motto. Yet with this little object I can sign the death warrant of an entire world and consign a billion souls to Oblivion.

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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #2 on: July 31, 2003, 05:07:32 PM »
Something in the Dark
Strike like Blood
Crimson, black and cold
Watching below and into the sky
I start an endless cry

Black cold water want to embrace me
Falling faster and faster
Every inch, deeper and deeper
The wind now turns to hurt my sky, cold as Ice

I look up into the sky, wondering, thinking
The stars, the moon are shining bright
Deep, Deep Into the Night

Relaxing, smashing down, bone to break
Blood that flows turns to freezing liquid
This that once was warm and carring

Now It ends and now it comes
Key to Heaven
Gate to Hell
Soul then trapped...
Forever never dieing...

As we all form one dark flame
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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #3 on: July 31, 2003, 05:16:59 PM »
cool and thoughtful as well
I carry with me an Inquisitorial Seal. It is a small, unassuming object contained in a neat box of Pluvian obsidian. It is a modest thing. Relatively plain, adorned with a single motif and a simple motto. Yet with this little object I can sign the death warrant of an entire world and consign a billion souls to Oblivion.

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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #4 on: July 31, 2003, 05:22:55 PM »
yay!! people posting poems!!

Falhandir, I like a lots!

but Moonsinger... thats a great poem, melikes!!


anyone else got any?

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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #5 on: July 31, 2003, 05:37:22 PM »
i'll get me other poem, it's in an old english book i'll have to dredge up

War Is Laborious

War is laborious,
Not glorious,
As it's made out to be,
The smell is a stench,
It would make youwretch.

People die,
In the sky,
Underground,
On the ground,
And in the sea,
People don't dance,
Around in glee.

Noone wins,
They all crash,
Aand need to recover,
The economy will slump,
Our planet look like a dump.


Just because one man,
One single man,
Wanted more power,
Or to shower,
In money and gold.

For war is laborious,
And not glorious,
As it's made out to be.


WE NEED HAPPY POEMS. i'm getting depressed ...
« Last Edit: July 31, 2003, 05:38:05 PM by falhandir »
I carry with me an Inquisitorial Seal. It is a small, unassuming object contained in a neat box of Pluvian obsidian. It is a modest thing. Relatively plain, adorned with a single motif and a simple motto. Yet with this little object I can sign the death warrant of an entire world and consign a billion souls to Oblivion.

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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #6 on: July 31, 2003, 08:02:39 PM »
'Those who can't write, become poets'- me
'failed authors are collectively known as poets'- me
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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #7 on: August 1, 2003, 07:15:06 AM »
What many critise, they cannot do themselves - common knowledge

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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #8 on: August 1, 2003, 07:51:09 AM »
quit with the slag war and post poems not insults please ladies!!!
I carry with me an Inquisitorial Seal. It is a small, unassuming object contained in a neat box of Pluvian obsidian. It is a modest thing. Relatively plain, adorned with a single motif and a simple motto. Yet with this little object I can sign the death warrant of an entire world and consign a billion souls to Oblivion.

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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #9 on: August 1, 2003, 07:35:38 PM »
Here I lie
Soon to die
Failed in life
But I tried

Fought good
Thought I could
Mud and blood
Emotions flood

Hate to rise
No disguise
Nations sly
Soldiers cry

Life slithers
Heart shivers
Vision murky
War still thirsty
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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #10 on: August 2, 2003, 01:34:19 PM »
He did it

He did it,
Though his parents told him not to,
He did it,
Though his friend told him not to,
He did it,
Though he knew it was wrong,
He did it,
Though he knew from what it may come,
He did it,
And he found that he had been so obsessed by it for so long,
That he had nothing else to do

I wrote this long ago. Dunno what you think of it,
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Re:From The Mind Of Me.....
« Reply #11 on: August 3, 2003, 12:45:16 AM »
As we all form one dark flame
Nice to see another AFI fan here.  Rather blatant reuse of the phrase, but the poem is great, and the line so good as to reuse it.  Note, I'm not critcizing, since I've used the exact same line in one of the songs I've written recently :-X
Everyone else, melikes, though some border on the goth poetry bit...
I'll leave you with this: "I have no terrible goth poetry to share, therefore I have no goth poetry"

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