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Offline Wuxiong

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Tiananmen Red Guards Background and Information
« on: April 7, 2009, 12:14:09 PM »
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Re: Tiananmen Planetary Information and the Tiananmen Red Guards
« Reply #1 on: April 7, 2009, 12:25:07 PM »
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Re: Tiananmen Planetary Information and the Tiananmen Red Guards
« Reply #2 on: April 7, 2009, 04:52:39 PM »
Well Jesus Christ man do ya work for the PLA? :)

Aye just kidding though you've an interesting group of folks here, kinda found myself raising an eyebrow when I thought of the square but eh what can you do. A pretty good start as far as background goes though there are more than a few spelling and grammatical errors though I didn't find any that couldn't be fixed with a quick spell-check. Hope you do a few stories off these guys, they seem to have potential.
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Re: Tiananmen Planetary Information and the Tiananmen Red Guards
« Reply #3 on: April 7, 2009, 05:27:59 PM »
You even gave them medals? This is ridiculously detailed. I approve!
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Re: Tiananmen Planetary Information and the Tiananmen Red Guards
« Reply #4 on: April 7, 2009, 07:28:55 PM »
Nice fluff, Wuxiong, agree with posters above, it's pretty cool. Don't see anything wrong with the fluff so I'll leave it at that. It would be cool to see a little story on these guys. Good work so far, man.  :)

 


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