Topic: 1.5k list please comment on.

[Shade, Bankai King]

Okay here is the list i will be using until i get enough models to do the marine themned one in the imperial guard forum.


Doctrines
Carapace armor
Cyber enhancement
Sharp Shooters
Iron Disipline
Drop troops

HQ
HSO-Power sword,Bolt pIstol,Refractor Feild,Trade Mark Item,Medallion Crimson
2x Emlta Guns
2x Vets with Las pistols and ccw
All have carapace armor-168pts.
Commisar-bolt pistol-power sword,carapace armor-51pts.

Troops
Jo-power fist,honorifica imperialis,medallion crimson
4x flamers
all have carapace-144pts.

Squad 1-carapace armor,plasmagun,lascannon-115pts.
squad 2-carapace armor,plasmagun,lascannon-115pts.

Jo-Power fist,macharian cross
1 grenade launcher
1 medic
2 lasguns
all have carapace
120pts.

squad 1-lascannon,grenadelauncher,carapace armor-113pts.
squad 2-lascannon,grenadelauncher,carapace armor-113pts.

Heavy Support
Lemon Russ-Lascannon,Heavy Bolters,Track gard,Extra armor,improved com,rough terrian mod-205pts.

Notes-All officers have iron displine all squads have cyber enhance ment

total 1499pts.

[Insidious Heresy]

HQ
Way to expensive, you shouldn't need anything more than a plain officer, and a standard to provide leadership.   If you want to keep the special weapons then go all the way and buy as many as you can, the unit will only get one chance to use it so it has to count... note that this is a risky and expensive way to use an HQ

commissars arn't really worth the points either.


Troops
The HQs are on the expensive side as well, try and find a way to trim them down.

You are extremely light on manpower, basically as a result of spending so much on doctrines... more troops are preferable to better ones as 4 infantry squads just are not going to cut it at this point level (except with mechanized infantry of course).  I would suggest dropping either 1 or both of your equipment doctrines to make room for more troops.

Heavy Support
Again, a bit to much spent on upgrades, this tank is 60pts more expensive then it really has to be.  Improved comms is about alll I would keep here if you want it.

Tanks travel in packs of pairs or triples.  One tank is just presenting a target to the enemy...


Overall
Lack of bodies and firepower seem to be the weak points of this list, should be easily solved by shaving some of the unnecessary point expenditures though.

[ThePraetorian]

IS hit the nail on the head with the above post.  HQ is way overpriced, follow IS directions on HQ.

Carapace armor is a waste, take more bodies with the points.

2 Medallion Crimsons?  Why?  Especially a waste on the J.O.

You wasted WAY too many points on silly toys like Cyber enhancement and Carapace.

Take more bodies, you want to drop in on an enemy with way too little firepower.